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Miner Poet's avatar

Masterfully in control. And that couplet’s a killer.

Ray Sweatman's avatar

Oh my that poor drake! Did we shoot ourselves in the duck?

Aaron Lantz's avatar

I love the final couplet particularly, but the whole image is really good.

Joe's avatar

Thank you, Aaron! Glad to have you as a reader.

Kim Williams, M.Div.'s avatar

Yep. It’s like that some days. Steady, inconsiderate and unrelenting.

Gary L Taylor's avatar

Wonderfully done. I love the imagery and how it's delivered.