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Rhea's Work's avatar

I loved this poem when I first read it and didn't have a chance to comment. To me, it contains so much that is jagged, and wrong with the way the world is ordered --, until the ending-- a beautiful, soft landing into what a person values. What a great title for it, too. 'Starter Family.' As if to say, 'here we are, and there is love, too, and maybe this is where we can begin.'

Ray Sweatman's avatar

There's a lot of nut to crack here. I'm taken by that last stanza.

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