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Ray Sweatman's avatar

There's a lot of nut to crack here. I'm taken by that last stanza.

Meditations On Permafrost's avatar

That’s a powerful meditation on what really matters and perhaps how our modern condition removes us from it.

I especially liked the last stanza:

The worms, I think, are still awake

and the eye, the voice, of our love

is a vaster thing than my heart

can hold on the train out of town.

Moon-Kite Maker's avatar

Thank you for this comment! I agree, modernity raises the question of value urgently and fundamentally. And yet, perhaps it also offers new avenues to access what matters. For instance, I have two friends who are scientists—a mycologist who studies root-system symbiosis and an entomologist who studies bees. They live in the woods with a gaggle of chickens, bringing their expertise to bear on questions of honey-hive production and soil remediation. Is this, too, a kind of modernism? I hope at least it aspires to be.

Meditations On Permafrost's avatar

That’s also an interesting point, I think they seem to embody a functional modernity that isn’t consumerist in its aspirations, but perhaps focused on the acquisition of knowledge to improve the conditions of the world. Modernity lifts us up as well. Which is easy to forget sometimes when we clash against its dark parts as individuals.

Moon-Kite Maker's avatar

Yes, I like that reading of the situation. Evil is the whole viewed from one vantage point: Nietzsche’s falcon as described by the lamb. I think I’ll write something about this for your consideration.

Meditations On Permafrost's avatar

I very much look forward to reading that.